The Page One Screenwriting Contest Winner 2000
R.D. Meyer of Rosemont, Minnesota
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FADE IN: EXT. OUTDOOR BASEBALL STADIUM -- DAY Detective BYRONE DEXTER stands at top of ramp. Fedora in hand. Listens to hefty soparno finish the National Anthem. Pull the fedora down on his head. Strides down ramp. BYRONE'S VOICE Turns at end of ramp. Walks through exit gate. BYRONE'S VOICE EXT OUTSIDE STADIUM -- DAY Emerges from stadium's shadow. Shields his eyes. BYRONE'S VOICE Byrone stops to clean gum from his heel. Sighs. BYRONE'S VOICE Crack of the bat. A cheer. Looks up at incoming home run ball. Ball hits him on head. Byrone crumbles to the ground. FADE People have gathered round. Bystander slyly pockets ball. POV camera rises from Byrone's body. BYRONE'S VOICE Bright light slowly envelopes Byrone. His voice starts to echo. BYRONE'S VOICE |