The Page One Screenwriting Contest Winner 2002
Andrew Strieber of Los Angeles, CA
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FADE IN: INT. HOSPITAL EXAMINATION ROOM - DAY In the distance a PA system is calling doctors to exam rooms. An EYEBALL, immobile, pupil dilated wide, so blank it might as well belong to a corpse. A pen light clicks on.
A hand pries the lid up and puts in drops. They dribble out.
A jar shatters. The eye briefly darts to the noise.
Fingers snap in front of the eye. Nothing.
A hand waves up and down in front of the eye. Still nothing.
Their voices fade. A door closes Passive, strapped to a chair, is a TWELVE YEAR OLD GIRL. But in an instant she slips her restraints, grabs a scalpel, and straps back in. A slow smile creeps across her face. |